LucilaSofia-Chain

Chain writing (17-06-2009)
Contribute to the story writing at least **three sentences** and including **one of the words** below. Your partner has to **continue** the thread following the same rule. Each of you has to contribute **6 times**. **Underline the words in the table** as you use them. starve drag rush whistle handle burst deceive || fingertip stream ceiling risk failure || foolish fixed straight cautious nasty daily meaningless || You can check the meaning of the words here.
 * **Verbs ** || **Nouns ** || **Adjectives ** ||
 * struggle

Dear Charlie, I moved to another house because two years ago, I was reading my newspaper when my sister told me that the __ceiling__ was burning. First, I ran very fast to the kitchen to call the fireman. I was very nervous. I was afraid that the roof collapsing, so I decide __straight__ to run out of the house with my sister. We wait 15 minutes for the firefighters. They were 12 man. When they arrived, they wanted to open the door to take out my dog, but they realised that the __handle__ was broken. So suddenly they broke the window to enter. My dog was barking. Then, firefighters managed to extinguish the fire, but the door remained closed. The roof was __nasty__, the tiles were burnt and the window, broken. When my parents arrived, they took a big scare. They helped me to cure my sister because unfortunatly she cut her __fingertip__. We were very tired and my dog too. Luckly, the big black smoke vanished. We could't believe something so __foolish__ had happened. Our <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">perents scolded us and told us that we would not be alone in our house <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">never again. We were very sad about what had happened and asked forgiveness. We cleaned our house, very <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">__coutiously__ to not <span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 128);">hurt. The smell was horrible and I<span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 0);"> faint. My <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">parent were very scared, so they took me to the hospital. The doctors __dragged__ me to the office because they didn't have couch. When I woke up, I realised what <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">were happening, and I <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">scared soo much. My sister was scared too. My mom <span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">forgot the money to pay the medicine, so she <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">were in a __rush__. She drove to my house, and she picked up <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">his wallet. She arrived <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">to the hospital twenty minutes later. My mother coudn't see us, so my father <span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">__whistle__ <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">she. She run up to my father and she hugged my father. My sister started crying. When the doctors <span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 128);">__fixed__ me, we returned to the burned house. We <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">feeded the dog, and we slept. The next day we went out to <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">breath, because in the house the smell was very disgusting. So my father decided to <span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">by a new house, we coudn't <span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 128);">__starve__ of the good life. We moved to this big house, it's very beautiful. How are you? How are your family? Kisses, Emily.

<span style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 130%; background-color: rgb(192, 192, 192);">//<span style="color: rgb(0, 128, 0);">Spelling mistakes. <span style="color: rgb(128, 0, 128);">Vocabulary mistakes. // //<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255);">Grammar mistakes. ////<span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Invented words. <span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">Punctuation. <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">Word order. <span style="color: rgb(0, 255, 0);"> Tenses. // <span style="color: rgb(115, 29, 231);">