LucilaSofia-Journey

**Write a story.** You're going to write a story driving inspiration from the words in the image.


 * Steps to follow:**

**Before you start** Read the words, **discuss** with your partner about general ideas for your story. Use the **discussion page** for that.


 * Writing** You can write any story you want to, BUT it has to be about a **journey**.Use at least **forty (40) words** from this image. Use a **different color ** to identify them. When you use nouns, you can change them from singular to plural or vice versa. If you use verbs you can also change them to the past or/and add -ing.


 * Don't** write more than 250 words.

Remember this is a narrative, it's easier if you write events **in chronological order**.

**After you have finished writing.** Check the language. Verbs, spelling, vocabulary. Check the punctuation. If you haven't used connectors, include some.

[|This is how you will be graded].

=__**A trip to the Earth.**__=

Romeo was a man who lived in a PECULIAR BLUE CAPSULE in the MOON. His parents, TOM and Kate, LEFT the EARTH because they were obligated to make a project related with the STARS in the space... and there they had TWO suns, Romeo and HELMET. HELMET was the twin of Romeo. The brothers had to CONTROL the CIRCUITS of the orbital that where arround the PLANETS. This circuits were imaginary, so every two hours they had to CHECK the changes of the positions. They had to do this because their parents always took notes about this in a big white PAPER that was connected with the Earth. Romeo dreamed with the life in the Earth and travelling arround the WORLD because his parents met there doing DIFFERENTS kind of trips, but he KNOWS that this dreams were impossible to make it real. So he hated the life in the moon and every time that he had to teletranaported in SPACESHIPS, he got ungry. Everyday he used to THINK about metting someone of the Earth, so ONE day he decided to use the computer to enter a chat. There he met a girl, called Juliet, that first she was his friend, but when the TIME pass.. he realiced that SOMETHING change in his mind and in his conscience.. he falled in LOVE. From NOW, his life started to have a funny side, that in the PAST didn't exist. At SIX o'clock he connected to the chat and sent pretty photos to Juliet, and Juliet did it too. The time past, and everyday he knew each other a little bit more and Romeo started to FELLING very happy and his dream came more and more big. But he coudn't support any more, so he did his luggage, he put TEN SHIRTS and NINE shorts on it, and he decided to LEAVE the moon. He LOOKED very nervous because he KNEW that his parents would got sad, but he didn't care so he TOOK his equipment and he left it. He SAT down on the spaceship being the comander. Romeo was felling the adrenaline, but not because of the took off, was because he would steped in the Earth. He knew that the trip would be long because the Earth was FAR away, MILES and miles away. He had to travel THOUSAND kilometres, checking that the sistem was okey. But when he was arriving he realiced that something was WRONG because he HEARD a sound like metal.. it was his brother knocking the door... Helmet wanted to go to the Earth too.

Safía and Lucila.